Media Release!!!!!!!
On Sunday the 14 2018 at 4:27 Ngatea Primary School had a burglary. The Person that did this crime had Short light Hair, bright coloured clothes and Nike shoes. The person that did this crime drinks coffee has glasses and eats chocolates. If you see a person running around the streets with light hair, bright coloured clothes and one Nike shoe please contact straight away danielle.sowden@ngatea.school.nz if you have any further questions about this crime make sure you contact danielle.sowden@ngatea.school.nz
Hmmmm are we 100% sure that the glasses and the coffee belong to the criminal? You have done a great job adding detail to your writing here, Danelle, just remember that in a media release you can only give out information that you know is completely true.
ReplyDeleteAmazing media release good job.
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