Cross country!
GO!I was off at the blink of an eye .
I sprinted up the muddy,sticky,wet hill.
We went through a creek with water as cold as ice and rocks all down the bottom.
Once i crossed the creek i ran across three people then i was coming eleventh .
I slipped on my but but got back up again .
On my second lap i had to run up the hill again i almost slipped like three times .
I walked for the creek and ran again .
On the last lap I sprinted so fast and only just bet Reegan past the hill.
I sprinted like never before past the finish line .
My parents,friends and siblings were all cheering for me.
When i was done i needed to catch my breath before i could even talk .
I ended up coming 10th.

Great piece of writing about your cross country experience, Danelle. (Just remember to edit your punctuation - lots of little i's!)
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